This is my "entry" into Owlhaven's writing contest, due by noon tomorrow. She has an "I am from" writing prompt that I fell in love with it and couldn't stop thinking about until I had done it. So here it is:
I am from slow rumbling thunder on drizzly days, handmade quilts, moss hanging from live oaks, and purple hull peas shelled on the porch swing. From empty Coco-cola bottles refunded at Piggly Wiggly, and Ford pickups moseying over country roads with kids in the back holding Sonic cherry slushies.
I am from front yards ankle-deep in pine needles and leaf piles burning. From jacks tingling from Mama’s hands onto the green kitchen linoleum and the crackle of kindling in the fireplace while socked feet pad down the stairs.
I am from abandoned cemeteries overrun with daffodils, dogwood trees blooming in the back ravine, ticks and mosquito bites, fat tadpoles in Mason jars, lightening bugs cupped in our hands, cockleburs stuck on our bobbysocks and sour wild plums along the barbed-wire fence.
I am from graveside ceremonies that aren’t over until everyone’s shoveled some dirt on. I am from white Easter hats and stockings on sisters who romped during the week in corduroys with their bottle-fed goats, calves, colts and kittens. I am from gentle brown eyes and delicate fingers on strong women, from Farris and Mary and Marie. From saw-dust hands carrying leathery doctor’s bags, from E.A. and Charlie and Charles.
I am from Dixie and Confederate flags and KKK, but from family who taught me “Ain’t no difference ‘tween my black skin and your white, we all the same unda’neath. And God loves ever one of us.” I am from Southern hospitality to ever one. From thinkers and doers “do unto others as you would have them do unto you.”
From “Pretty is, is pretty does” and “Practice makes perfect” piano lessons tomorrow. From “Hold your shoulders back.”
I am from week-long revivals and old-fashioned-day Sundays with “dinner on the ground” and flappy calico sunbonnets. From yelling preachers and a mama whispering prayers on her knees every morning and “let’s fix the windows on the widow’s house before the cold sets in.”
I'm from hillbilly Louisiana and red-neck Mississippi, French Huguenots and Scottish nobility, from Indian women who married English gun-packing farmers. I am from fried apple pies and turnip greens. From lucky black-eyed peas on Magnolia china for New Years and fruit salad mounded into watermelon baskets on Fourth of July.
From the grandfather who called me his gal-baby and taught me how to punch the letters of my name into leather, from the grandmother who’d let me watch cartoons sitting Indian-style on the floor with an entire bottle of Maraschino cherries, and from another grandmother who wrote poetry and fiddled and sang and painted and crocheted her creativity into my soul.
I am from dresser drawers stuffed with journals and farmer’s almanacs and old love letters. From snapshots hanging on all the walls and in little frames on every tabletop. And from long-gone storytellers whose precious memories still travel from my lips to the ears of my boys snug under their quilts at bedtime.
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21 comments:
That was beautiful!
Beautiful Jenny, You are such a gifted writer. I love these Iam memes. I have enjoyed your postings keep it up!
Hope to see you Monday when I come to the Lake!
Jenny--
I read a lot of these when this meme came out last year, but yours is the best one I've seen. Really beautiful.
Cool blog, Jenny! Took me back to one of my favorite movies - Steel Magnolias - where I always wished I had lived!
Being from Arkansas myself, we share a lot of the same memories, Jenny.
Outstanding job on this one.
I did this one last spring, but haven't gotten around to it in time to participate in Mary's contest this time.
I love this! So beautiful and moving. Loved it!
Words can't express what I really feel. ... I know as well as anyone where this woman came from. She was fearfully and wonderfully formed in my womb. But I've often thought that she was actually an angel sent down from heaven who at night went back to heaven. I am so thankful that Jenny is from all these wonderful and varied patches of life. The parts equal an awesome total. I am so thankful and blessed that I am one of these parts. Looking forward to many more pieces of the puzzle of your life. Thankful to be your mother, Mama. ... Take your vitamins!
That was beautiful! You write so well! Thanks for visiting my blog!
Jenny - this was outstanding. Incredibly beautiful.
I wish I could meet you! :)
Cara
Wow, this is really lovely. So heartfelt, evocative and eloquent. Well done!
Wow! This is terrific! (Thanks for your nice comments too by the way.)
I love this: "And from long-gone storytellers whose precious memories still travel from my lips to the ears of my boys snug under their quilts at bedtime."
Fabulous. Truly.
Oh, thank you, guys! So much. It's always nice to have someone enjoy reading what I especially enjoyed writing. Thanks, Mary, for inspiring me with your "I am from" and for the deadline to actually get mine written.
(I love you, too, Mama!)
Wow; no wonder you are a finalist!
Wow, I was RIGHT there with you. What an amazing piece of writing, you captured it. I loved the bit about your Grandma letting you watch cartoon while you ate a jar of maraschino cherries. For some reason I could see you so clearly in that.
Wow, I was RIGHT there with you. What an amazing piece of writing, you captured it. I loved the bit about your Grandma letting you watch cartoon while you ate a jar of maraschino cherries. For some reason I could see you so clearly in that.
Very nice. You made me feel as if I was there watching you.
Beautifully written.
Very moving piece! Thanks for sharing your soul with us.
Awesome!! Loved it.
Rachel in Idaho
Sent from Owlhaven
Wow,I feel like I just watched the movie of your life!
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